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[IaaDiTe Page 99 : Last Time]

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I like what you are doing here a little bit, Andrea, and Olivia too, who has taken a liking and sorta behaviour copying to her, are both trying to go fast, "no use standing around", while "Andrew-based creatures" are stalling even now. Is very good.

24HoursSleeping responds:

Yeeeeh! Olivia's a little back and forth, given her role in things.

[IaaDiTe Page 97: Guilt Box]

See, actually, did you ever reveal what the contents were? I know in the endgame final pages, there's the bit where the box thing is found by tiself, and the contesnts are clearly visible and it triggers a bossfight, but that kinda felt like a decoy placed there and not the real thing. I'm not asking what IS in the box, if you still don't know, or wanna keep it private, but didya ever reveal, or find out that info?

24HoursSleeping responds:

Oh yeah, it's, uuuuh... page 517.

[IaaDiTe Page 96 : Get it Over With]

AH~! What's in the box?

https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/24hourssleeping/iaadite-page-461-jack-in-the-box

It's his real full name!

24HoursSleeping responds:

Lol! Didn't even mean to do that, but I guess it works.

[IaaDiTe 94 : Don't Ask That]

...I'm not seeing it...? You mean that vest, was the case that's mentioned later that you said would show up earlier and is now showing up? I did not catch that this whole tme. Thought it was a clothes piece.

24HoursSleeping responds:

Understandable; especially in these early pages. The art was very rough.

[IaaDiTe Page 92 : Handshake]

You could, in this situation, extend the other hand and pick Jack up like a puppy!

>:3 and then throw him far off and start a Pure Jack bossfight for sparring and [[wild prizez!!]]

24HoursSleeping responds:

Clown would probably just accept his fate.

[IaaDiTe Page 90 : Seasick]

Suddenly, Iwant to see Andrea fall down these stairs. Olivia too!

24HoursSleeping responds:

I'm surprised they didn't. There are an awful lot of stairs.

[IaaDiTe Page 81 : Book Browsing]

Ah so THAT's why they can't rng a memory that would disprove all the lies presented thus far, and the ones that will be presented later.

24HoursSleeping responds:

A sea of information but nothing good to read.

[IaaDiTe Page 79 : Family issues]

"Solve your own family issues!"

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*Proceeds to later not let Andrea talk to her mom, and presumably everyone else in her family, and utilizes absolution magic to halt her from doing so at almost any cost

24HoursSleeping responds:

Andrew, master of gaslighting.

[IaaDiTe Page 74 : Use the ladder]

Ah, lookie at the last page, it is me in the comments! It seems I have made my way back to all the way to the start. I'll read a bit more for stuff I missed, but that seems to be it, potion seller!

24HoursSleeping responds:

You have come full circle!

[IaaDiTe Page 70 : Not an Author]

How much of this comic could've been fecked up if they stayed a bit more and read a lot of the mem books... You could've done some freaky sort of "I know how this ends, everyone knows how this ends, but how the HELL do we get there" kinda story. Buuuuuut also, I kinda like the one you made.

24HoursSleeping responds:

Looking back at it... I feel like Olivia picking out all the worst books was probably destined, set up by a certain someone.