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[IaaDiTe Page 594: Outmatched]

Andrea's gonna get her lucid dreamin powahs through the sheer anger of not being able to land a hit.

"Oi 'Livia, fir Fok's sake, stop dodgin' me attacks lass! Foken 'eel mate, try dodgin this!" and then pulls some bullshift like https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CqZsliFvWrU

24HoursSleeping responds:

She'll land a hit some day!

[IaaDiTe Page 593: Near Death Experience]

Ok, so it's not (Y) to parry, it's (B) to dodge. Doesn't change the fact that Andrea's getting warning popups now, still like a videogame. But she could do some coollookin stuff with this... "ability", and that's what we're here for!

Also, did she just miss a counterattack? Or is Olivia talkin to herself?

24HoursSleeping responds:

Missed a counterattack. Andrea doesn't seem to be quite convinced of her own ability yet, but it certainly has Andrew spooked.

[My Carnival]

Ah, nice! The first one is ENA https://www.newgrounds.com/series/ena , the 2nd I'm preety sure ya already showed off, but it's made outta some strange reflective material (also quite impractical, how would ya see through those lined eyeholes), and the 3rd looks like it's made of vegetables or compost, while not looking disgusting or rotten!

FTerracciano responds:

Thank you! Well first of all, the one made of reflective material is simply silver paper and then you can see through the eye hole (I made it), the one that you say looks like vegetables is ceramic. The last one is a double face of expressions, have you ever seen the sad and happy Greek masks? They are fused together.

[IaaDiTe Page 592: Swing, Batter]

W-what the HELL is this?! A popup?! What's next, press (Y) to parry? I imagine it is, this deosn't seem like the time of press (BTN_OPTIONSBTN) to continue from checkpoint.

24HoursSleeping responds:

"Oh no Andrea's (Y) button isn't working"

[New oc :00]

Well that's certantly a strange and funky creature! It would be nice to see them in a bit of a lighter background, even at max brightness (AHHH FEK MY EYES) it's still kinda hard to make out all her details. Also, I don't understand that blob thing fully, if ya could explain on it a bit?

KaTCakE01 responds:

The blob thing is like parasite, but it's more like a spirit thingy and like she got corrupted by it

[Super Alt Color 4]

OH YEP, DAS DEFINITLY BETTER SHADING!
...or better colours, at least. But it is better, and das what we like ta see! Great!

ParraDX responds:

Ill eventually search up how to do it properly, i only added it in this piece so it doesnt seem empty, but ty!! I definitely like the result

[Red Virgin Mary]

Ah yeas, The Saviour's Mother but red and evil and bloody and killing people hmm yes murderrrrrrrrr and blood

Also, from a distance, this looks kinda like a cute red snail creature! Like this:
https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/d9820acabcb14d73c93a904adc022dd2

FTerracciano responds:

Actually when I did it I didn't see it in this bloody and evil way. However, yes, there is a similarity between this work and the one shown to me.

[IaaDiTe Page 589: Accept No Substitutes]

Ah, here we are. I suppose we're about to, finally, see a gorey, relentless and tortoure-y beatdown, with some magical and inexpclicable stuff going on for fun, I hope, and across the dreams aswell, I bet. How very exciting! I would tell you to not hold back with draeing these next pages, but not only have you already drawn them, you've also most likely not held back with em, eighter. Only thing to do now, is to watch the unfoldings of your work, and put a sick beat on for it.
https://youtu.be/7113wbJD3sw?si=AsF0wi11xlIZzNM3

24HoursSleeping responds:

There are some good good smackdowns. Especially as we get further on.

[IaaDiTe Page 588: Bunny Be Gone]

As I said, they are becoming chalk. This should be enought to draw a small door!

24HoursSleeping responds:

Probably too liquified to make very good drawing material.

[IaaDiTe Page 587: Variety Pack]

Oh that's not so bad. It's good to have a break from the overwhealming action for just a page in these kinda scenarios. Especially since, if Andrea's not gonna attack them in the next page, then they're gonna attack her, I bet.

Also, I know these clones don't have much equipment, but could they drop chalk and baseball bats on death? Suddenly, making many clones for mental torture and also having his own attacks be the way to fight back against him makes Andy feel like The Snachter boss form A hat in time; that shows a method to fight him off, which makes him a lotttttttttttt less scary.

24HoursSleeping responds:

A baseball bat might be especially handy. I feel like smashing and bashing might work better than cutting in this situation.