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[IaaDiTe Page 577: The Split]

Wow... so the full name of this... character... is Andrew Jack Trocky Meat - the Clown, rabbit keeper, great librarian and soul-overpowering dreamer cat. With a title like that, yeah, he seems a bit strong.

Also, I know I've been mocking you for sucking at puzzle games, but now I think about it, this feels a lot like puyo tetris 2 lore. There's constantly an evil presense, switching names and forms as the adventure contuinues - from some bad guy, some preety good guy, to even the very kind and good protaganists of the story becoming the evil destroying everythin. Along with 2 godly figures, 2 dreamers in this case, with one REALLY overpowering the other to do... is Andy even after evil deeds? Wha's he tryna do again? Hold on, let me check!

Okay, I just read those parts of the comic that I skipped bfore, the Andy's backstory ones wiht the fetus eating, and HOLLLLLYYYY SHITTTTT DUDDEEEEEE that is scary and REALLY good, suddenly dropping so much lore felt scary and powerful as hell, that was great! The "early ecess of brain matter in the tumor" part somehow felt the coolest, that was amazing, cannot say enought how cool that section is. But uhhh, we still don't quite know Andy's intentions. Is he tryna kill Andrea and take over the body, so he can live? Or tryna tie up loose ends and explain everything, so she lives to maybe get him out somehow...? Nahh, he's prolly done relying on his sis. If I just missed somethin and you're not planning to say it later on, then please tell me now, and if ya plan to reveal it later, then keep it a secret from me for now, please amd thamk youuu!

Also, that is a fuckin 1Fish2FishRedFishBlueFish refrence in the descruption. Bloody hell bruv.

24HoursSleeping responds:

I couldn't resist the reference, it was right there!

And Andrew's goal is just to keep Andrea asleep. Like, forever, or as long as he can. He just kind of wants to continue existing, which is probably pretty fair as far a villainous motives go.

[IaaDiTe Page 575: Break Me]

Dude really just wanted ta give his sis a nice lil heavenly home, but the heckin gal kept tryna escape, like an inobedient puppy who keeps tryna run out when you open the front door, despite having everythin it could want in yer home.

Except, what makes Andy be the one in charge? Why is he suddenly "the dreamer"? Fug makes him so special? We will find out, in the next few pag... oh.

This is page 575. And like, wayyy sometime back, you, [[artist]], said that this would have 600 pages. There is basicly no time for hoping somein will be explained later. We are almost done, amd that is heckimg scarie! QwQ! It's gonna be okay, you're still gonna be here, right, [[artist]]?

24HoursSleeping responds:

I don't think I could stop making art if I tried. (Though I probably wont be doing daily pages of anything else- feeling like I could make better art if I didn't do it on such a tight schedule.)

As for Andrew... I kind of feel like they've both always been two "minds" trying to control the same dream, but until this comic, Andrea has had the upper hand. It's also why so many of the dreams were better in the flashbacks; Andrew has no practice, and has had a very rough life, so his mind drifts naturally towards more nightmarish versions.

[IaaDiTe Page 573: Interruption]

Mate, he looks geniuanly confused. "Fugin, idk how she got there, I was gonna kill her just like you but she did it herself I guess?"

24HoursSleeping responds:

Lol, probably wasn't expecting this conversation at the beginning of what looks to be a "to-the-death" fight.

[Ralsei 07/01/24]

Dood, he's so wavy! And the glasses being compleatly green, including the glass he sees through, it all looks really strange!

But I do gotta say, cool fur. And everything except the wayviness is neat.

STearleArt responds:

Thanks :)

[dumped dump of drawimp]

Mate, cool arts, but you really gotta start rating some stuff as M. While dangling off a bridge, tied up by your own guts sounds amazing, I can imagine a few pplz who just can't really apriciate how much fun that is! The darn party poppers!

ParraDX responds:

mmm, maybe i should, honestly alwayz considered the M rating for really disturbing/unsettling stuff when talking abt blood/gorey, but i'll keep it on consideration!

[IaaDiTe Page 571: Panic]

YOOOOOO NO WAYYY!!! YOU, MAKING SHADING?! HELLLLL YEAHHH!!! Oh mate, if the further pages have this than this comic just got a whole lot better.

Also, I'm guessing, baby and submarine dimension? The Clock's barn is my second guess, and no way it's the stairs.

24HoursSleeping responds:

Yeh, most chapters I do hatch shading, decided to do blacks on this one. Also some pure white on the bandages and knife, so it's breaking the 4 color rule I have on most chapters.

And your first guess was right. It's not directly the same as the baby, but I think of them as related.

[Luna LCD Pixel]

Honestly, kinda hard to make out what one is looking at here. Takes a bit of imagination to see the mouse, and much more for it's intended animations, but it certantly is a start! And the sleep one is certantly the best!

Noobrapter responds:

Thank you for the critique. It is a LCD design for my OC "Luna the Rabbit". The animation "Happy" is suppose to be Luna holding a peace sign, "Cheer" is raising both arms up, "Walk" make shorter to give walking illusion (without the vertical movement it does fall a bit flat), "Sleep" in blanket. I hope that clears up any confusion.

[CATZILLAAAA!!!!!!!!!]

Kitty! Hecc yeas, this is the best apocalypse everrrrr!

AileenInk responds:

Thanks! :D All Hail our cat overlords!!

[IaaDiTe Page 570: Corpse Chute]

"Welcome, my dear sister, to Tilted Towers."

24HoursSleeping responds:

The loot isn't worth it!

[A night in]

Dood, that's good! It's actually preety scary, and making a 16 page comic is really quite hard, so good job on finishing it, and thank you for doing so even after the contest deadline so people can see!

And I do hope your arm is okay now.

Jam3e responds:

Thank and yeah arm is better now i was putting pressure on it but it all better now so keep making art