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[IaaDiTe Page 600: Execution]

Ah, alright, that's preety good. I qas thinkin maybe you couldn't really make a good title card, since it's not a new enviorment and we already know how it looks, but no, this shot is actually preety epic!

Also, do the blood cells have... a ceiling? Is there a way to just climb out this place? It wouldn't do much, but could it be done?

24HoursSleeping responds:

Hmm. I kind of imagine they just go on forever.

[Cant Draw too Squishy]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THEY ARE SO DEFLATED AMD SAD NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO >w<

Also mate, I know you say you're not trying to improve your arts here, but if you struggle with draeing anythin decent lookin, you can do a bitta draeing warm-ups, like a simple shaped sketch of a cute cat with minimal details, or somethin simple like that, just some quick 15-25 minute arts to warm ya up for the stuff ya actually came here ta draw; and then your artsing should go from just not working to being quite fine! At least for that day...

[Valentine’s Day 2024]

Ya know what, I geniuanly didn't recognise G-Su for a moment, with such casual clothing. I thought you dyed your hair and was freindishly vibin with your own oc.

[Valentines day!]

Those poses... did you just take them off of Zed, Jay and Elle from Puyo Tetris?
https://www.deviantart.com/nick07208/art/Puyo-Puyo-Tetris-2-Zed-Fiber-Sprite-948781589
https://arleandcarbuncle.fandom.com/wiki/Jay_%26_Elle

DoeDeev responds:

no actually! i just drew them without any poses, i didn't think i'd actually reference something!

[IaaDiTe Page 598: Her Olivia]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Dude, [[artist]], mate, we's gotta have a serious talk about doin this kinda stuff. It was all fun when you were fuckin with Andrea's emotions, and breaking her mentally, but if you now start to administer that pain and sadness from the catto, over to all your loyal readers, then I... I actually don't know. Your plots is too intrestin ta leave behind.

Also, how the hell are ya gonna make a title card fit into this whole thing in just 2 pages? It's always been a thing, big, single-pannel draeing with the comic title every 100 pages, but you're in the middle of an action scene here.

24HoursSleeping responds:

I'll have to do it mid-action! (But really that's pretty much what I did.)

[Clown face]

Oh, that is kinda creepy. The squareness of the top Really makes this scarie.

FTerracciano responds:

Well, clowns have always been the fear of the unknown since no one knows who they really are behind the makeup (I'm not referring to It) also I made it based on the famous lyrical song "Ridi, clown".

[by the nine i'm tweakin]

Doode, I can't see the bottom half of the art 'cause my screen is too heccin dark from the outside sun. Remind me to take another look when I get back home.

But, from what I can see, sick lighting, and tonsa blood, which is always great!

[Happy Valentines dayy]

Oh wowie, das some cutie cuteness! I do like that funny pink filter! Oh and yeah, happi lovin peoplez day to ya too Kat!

[Martin the warrior 12/02/24]

Woah-ho! What is this? Far smoother, less blurry lineart! I see improvement! Hooray!

Actually, depending on who ya ask, this could be an improvement, or a sidegrade, or somethin worse. That type of lineart ya used was a very iconic part of yer style, changing it is quite significant, and some could actually say they prefer your older lines. But it is kinda about what you think is better, in the end.

STearleArt responds:

Ty! I like to blur my lineart to help make it look neater

[IaaDiTe Page 597: Tables Turned]

{Immenent Death}
{Press [[□]] to Quick-Dive}

I'm still convinced parts of this world work with videogame rules, like definitly this imment death thing and all the respawn stuff too, at least.

24HoursSleeping responds:

I had the thought once upon a time to do it as a game, but I don't think I'd have ever gotten it done.